Working on rendering

Here are two sketch/render sheets that I produced a couple of weeks ago when I started. Nothing special but it allowed me to get an idea as to how pro-markers (the pens we have been introduced to) work, as well as how to successfully layout a sketch sheet and direct the lookers eye. I feel this is one of the most important aspects of sheets like this, there should be a hierarchy of sorts which leads the audience through the drawings almost like a story.