Working on rendering

Here are two sketch/render sheets that I produced a couple of weeks ago when I started. Nothing special but it allowed me to get an idea as to how pro-markers (the pens we have been introduced to) work, as well as how to successfully layout a sketch sheet and direct the lookers eye. I feel this is one of the most important aspects of sheets like this, there should be a hierarchy of sorts which leads the audience through the drawings almost like a story.

Intro

This is a blog to for me to use as a visual diary, with all my sketches, renderings and models of work i create here at Brunel. To design is to make progress, in terms of you making progress and becoming a better designer, but also in the sense that you advance a product and make it better. Hopefully, studying here at brunel I'll make progress of my own and this should become apparent in the quality of my work that i post. I hope you enjoy watching my progress as i am making it! My first task in Design process class was to illustrate a design process, a very open ended brief which i took more in the sense of "illustrate your design process" so i got to drawing and annotating one of my own. Heres my attempt; its based on the concept of a smart watch, something that i was taking an interest in at the time.

thanks for looking.